Stacie shiveringly sips a green smoothie beside a sunny window, in spite of the severely snappy and snowy morning. Pleasingly pleasant piping hot peppermint tea perfectly permeates.
Like Catterel, I adore alliteration, and agree that your sentence evokes truly beautiful imagery. What a great way to start my Saturday; thank you for this gift Joss!
I love alliteration and assonance, and this is also a beautiful image.
Do you know the poem that starts “An Austrian army awfully arrayed Boldly by battery besieged Belgrade ….” and so on through the entire alphabet? Rhymes all the way, too!.
Jan 27, 2013 @ 15:00:38
Finishing the flu finds me flopped out on the furniture
Go Fourty-niners!
Jan 27, 2013 @ 01:54:01
I say a little alliteration leaves alluring appetites appeased.
Kind of. ;=)
Jan 26, 2013 @ 21:59:41
Wistful wishes wondering… what wakes winsomely within?
Jan 26, 2013 @ 21:43:18
Full moon, fits of musings, fine meanderings, finished marvels, finding meaning in the fantastic magic of the night.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 15:04:33
Melting, muddy morning muzzled in a murky miasma.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:33:26
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. mildly marvelous!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 13:53:18
Still cold with beautiful sunshine. Just sit in a sunny spot an bask in it.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 12:59:46
Rain rants along the railing right now. And that’s unusual for Phoenix in the winter!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:35:07
Phoenix feels filled, flipping weather full force. – a bit lame!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 12:49:14
Healing hands, helping hands, holy hands, gently hold our hearts.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:35:37
Mother Mary’s miracles of mercy multiply.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 11:55:48
Too early…my attempts fall flat, fail, flail and flounder on the floor.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:36:47
Caffeine can cause confusion to go its course!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 11:45:51
Snowflakes: Happy hexagons holding hands heading home.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 11:50:48
I can see their smiles!
Jan 27, 2013 @ 08:51:59
Loved this one
Jan 26, 2013 @ 10:51:39
Stacie shiveringly sips a green smoothie beside a sunny window, in spite of the severely snappy and snowy morning. Pleasingly pleasant piping hot peppermint tea perfectly permeates.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 11:50:15
awesome. Love it!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 10:45:25
Like Catterel, I adore alliteration, and agree that your sentence evokes truly beautiful imagery. What a great way to start my Saturday; thank you for this gift Joss!
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:37:24
So happy to oblige! Fun with words.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 09:54:02
I love alliteration and assonance, and this is also a beautiful image.
Do you know the poem that starts “An Austrian army awfully arrayed Boldly by battery besieged Belgrade ….” and so on through the entire alphabet? Rhymes all the way, too!.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 10:00:55
Was playing this with Happy Hermit http://www.happyhermitart.wordpress.com on Facebook so thought I would start a round here on the blog. I hadn’t heard of the one you mentioned so I found a reading of it on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=hVt9jA58DD4
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:27:33
Thank you so much for that URL – what a marvellous voice! I looked for more of his readings and found Tom O’Bedlam at http://www.youtube.com/user/SpokenVerse/feed?filter=1.
Jan 26, 2013 @ 16:43:09
He does have an exceptional voice!